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    Looking for Bear litrpg story?

    Yeah I saw that lol. I wonder if that's the reason the story got deleted?
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    Looking for Bear litrpg story?

    Does anybody know what happened to a story called Bearbarian? I read it on this site over a year ago but one day it just disappeared. Is just gone or under a different title or on a different site altogether?
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    I haven't had a ton of critical feedback so this will help me a lot. The fandom I'm taking some content from is Naruto but the exact region I put my OC in was never fleshed out so I had to come up with a lot of the specific story elements. Also, the 4 yr old to 40 yr old speech is what I wanted...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/142282/guardian-of-kirigakure/ Would be grateful for any feedback at all! Thanks!
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    Need feedback on 1st story (Time skip Advice)

    Hello, I am relatively new still to writing recreationally. And I've been posting the story below for a little under a year. I've put a lot of words into it so far and I have a whole timeline planned out but I feel like the whole thing drags a little too much. Would love so advice on how to...
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