Hello, I am relatively new still to writing recreationally. And I've been posting the story below for a little under a year. I've put a lot of words into it so far and I have a whole timeline planned out but I feel like the whole thing drags a little too much. Would love so advice on how to speed up story progression without hurting plot.
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Guardian of Kirigakure *OLD EDITION*
Growing up in the Land of Water as an orphan is a tall task. So why not add a little ninja spice to make it nearly impossible? How will this troubled orphan use the hungry sharks around him to his benefit? Before 1st Shinobi War. Hozuki clan and Kirigakure lore...