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    Feedback + suggestions (Closed)

    Heyyy...don't worry about it. I know what I signed up for, and I'm absolutely pleased with what you wrote. I'm thankful for the time you spent on my novel. I can understand what you say, I have to ensure to not praise the MC at every step...should save it for an important scene/situation. And...
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    I'd say impressions and possible weaknesses are what I want...If there are any problems, I might not able to fix them...but I at least know of them
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    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Uwahhhh...Thank you so much~~~ I'm glad you enjoyed it!! And I've realized I have to work on the description a bit more. Thank you again!
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    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Meeeeee~~~!!!! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/288770/former-crown-prince-favors-the-villainess/
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Ahhh...okay, so the flow is not right. I've felt it too...and many of my readers pointed it out to me too. I'm still working on it though. Thank you for your spending your time with my novel!!
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    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    Ahhhh....he does not get banished. He is forced to give up his title as the Crown prince to his new stepbrother. But the mc rather than giving his title for free, exchanges it with one of the most powerful Dukedom(though a fallen one due to internal conflict). But all in all, thanks for the review!
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    Please tell me if something is wrong. Last chapter I messed up when writing my dialogue. My new chapter is 80% so I am just double checking.

    "Wake up!" A voice called out from the aether, beckoning me, but where was it guiding me to? "Wake up!" Something shook my shoulder, as I tried(Pretty sure try is also correct) to open my eyes. “Pain, pure pain, my face, it burns! It burns! Pain!” My face felt as if it was melting. My eyes...
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    For real?! Well, I'm one of the happiest being right now lol 😝😝😝
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    Hmmmm...I have got my protection on. Blast with me the truuuuth!! The mood of the entire Empire of Zemira changed overnight with the death of the Empress, Helena Zemira. It was even worse for her son the Crown Prince, Arthur Zemira. When things proved to be difficult, the Emperor brought in...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Don't know if you're still doing this...but I'd love to hear your words...Be as brutal as you want to be lol 😝😝 https://www.scribblehub.com/series/288770/former-crown-prince-favors-the-villainess/
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    Feedback + suggestions (Closed)

    I'd be glad if you could go through my novel once. I've already written this novel once before...but it had too many plot holes, that I decided to scrap that and rewrite it again. Looking forward to your reply :blob_evil::blob_evil::blob_evil...
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    What kind of music do you guys listen to (If you do) to get you writing?

    Frisson. A YouTube channel. Whether it be studying or writing novel, the chill mix there is the best.
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    Feedback Offers For Everyone

    I'd be grateful for some feedback!!! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/183368/excrown-prince-favors-the-villainess/
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