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  1. ALonelyParrot

    The Second Tempest Contest

    Not that I will for certain, but can we join just for the heck of it? (Also, are anthologies accepted?)
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    Pen Pal Appeal

    @Hoshiandme @Wintertime Okay! Should I create private message for all of us?
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    Pen Pal Appeal

    If anyone is up for it, I would love to have someone Pen Pal with me. What will be included in the Pen Pal 1. Exchange reviews for one chapter 2. Provide ample feedback (At the very most a short essay. 200 or less preferred) 3. Supply suggestions to the story, writing style, and whatnot 4...
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    Perchance, would you spare me a pithy?

    @Scribbler Thank you for the criticisms. I have noticed that I tend to repeat words and change sentence structure weirdly. Though, it's been an ongoing problem. (3_3) I'll try my best to keep this in mind when I'm writing/editing the next chapter.
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    Perchance, would you spare me a pithy?

    @Shaiyamine Thank you so much for the criticisms! I'll be sure to make some edits when I have the time!
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    Need help with grammar

    Study for the SAT test. I'm being serious. After my mom forced me to study for the SAT, I've been a grammar nazi ever since. :LOL:
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    Perchance, would you spare me a pithy?

    If it's not too much of a bother, would you spare some of your time to give my story some critique? Thank you very much! The Blade's Tale (P.S. I need some help with naming the piece. I'll probably be asking for more advice in a month or two)
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    A Razors Edge - Balance between description and brevity

    I'm not quite sure, but how does one write with enough description to paint accurate pictures in the reader's mind while not boring them at the same time? I have a guess that I could read some literature and practice writing, but beyond that, are there anymore pieces of advice?
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    A little feedback, perchance?

    Here's the Story: Manuscripts from Sonus I'm making this particular story in order to help me world build for another story. There's not much for a continuing story, but I would hope to receive some feedback on the writing! Thank you!
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