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People critique and complain about whatever is the final straw, if it sounds hostile to you they are projecting some other issue into their comment. If your having self doubt about a particular complaint try getting the opinion of a friend (or fellow author) to judge if it is a valid way you...

None more limbs=more problems Proof: people have limbs and lots of problems, rocks have no limbs and no problems

Strength, having a 3rd arm is just OP Clearly I have a 3rd arm if I am deadlifting 3 abrams. But seriously do I start with my current self or an average human body? cause as a nomal human I would choose health. My RL body has an abnomal pain tolerance so I would have no big issus making myself...

A good point, I think most of what your describing would have to be from a first person perspective to have an impact on the reader. From a 3rd person limited perspective they wouldn't even know what was going on, from 3rd person omniscient it would still be lacking. Good to know, I have been...

I say nurf the accuracy, then they are much more destructive compared to bow and arrow but need to get in a closer range to be effective. Even early muzzle loaders had the power to punch though several lightly armered men, and they shoot strait at the enemy where as most arrows will only go...

I want to see more of the peasant who is divinly chosen as a hero. (not an isekai) usualy someone publicly recognized and groomed by a church. I also love the one where the MC has a oppisite gender friend as a child who they don't see romanticly, seperate, time skip, random encounter and now...

I have read those 3 and none of them felt like cannabilism to me. For me cannabilism means eating your own species (a species is defined as being able to have ofspring that can have their own offspring) a monster (Everybody Loves Big Chests) is definitly not the same species as humans/others...

If I am intrested in something then I go slower about 300 wpm, If I am rereading i add about 100 to that. regular boring material rate is about 400 WPM If the material is really boring I may speed read only geting a cursury understanding of the plot at around 1600 WPM. Don't know if that counts...

Let's put it to the test, someone post a link to a story with some human-human chowdown, then we can all go read it and give our personal reactions.

an overused mechanic (like cultivation) will allways feel like garbage writing until someone puts a new spin on it, that is because most cultivation novels are focused on length, not being word for word copied (only paraphrased), and an outlet for the authors frustrations. Any cultivation novel...

It wouldn't be fantasy if it was the same as the real world. Some things will be different from RL and they should be explained either as, RL with changes, or build your world from the base up explaining as the the protagonist learns or when it becomes relevant. So change whatever you want and...