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Thank you so much for your time! You are my first 'sort-of reviewer' for this story, and even though it is just the first chapter, I'm truly happy that you liked it! I sort of started this on a whim to experiment with an abstract concept in my mind, but I found out the pov in present-tense is...

Hi, I would love to have your feedback on my story. Only 3 chapters are up so far :) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/364180/welcome-to-nowhere/

I would love to put forward my story as well, in case you're still up for it. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/270740/madness-with-a-pinch-of-salt/ Thanks in advance :)

Really apreciate a thread like this. Give mine a try as well, if you have time https://www.scribblehub.com/series/270740/madness-with-a-pinch-of-salt/

Just came across this thread. I'd like to throw in mine as well, if you have the time :) Madness, with a pinch of salt

It is complex and feels like a real part of your world... but do keep in mind that it might turn off readers who just want a simple plot and don't want to think too much while reading the stories. I think you should slowly introduce the system in bits and pieces, not info-dump them all at once.