Search results

  1. LadyIsak

    First Chapter Analysis

    So, a question— I’m genuinely interested in your feedback, but I can’t quite promise that I’ll revise the zeroth (“first”) chapter based on your feedback or anyone else’s — I don’t want to get stuck in a loop of endless restarts, and I’d rather move on while keeping feedback in mind. Should I...
  2. LadyIsak

    The Partner Character Type

    If you don’t know what the Torah is, maybe you shouldn’t be quoting from English translations of it!
  3. LadyIsak

    The Partner Character Type

    If you don’t like it, don’t read it. It’s as simple as that. And in any case, I can cite any number of rabbonim, Orthodox, Conservative and Progressive, not to mention Jewish scholars of Biblical Studies, whose commentaries trouble the straightforward reading of both the Vaikra verses...
  4. LadyIsak

    I don want 2 write no more??? (th

    If you don’t like writing, and/or don’t want to do it, then just like … don’t. Nobody is going to come after you with hammers for not being a writer. Writer’s block, in my mind, is not the same as not wanting to write. It’s when writing’s just not happening, no matter how hard you try or how...
  5. LadyIsak

    [NSFW] Topics that you don’t want to get involve?

    While I don’t think that artistic depiction of any given thing is automatically endorsement, I have my personal squicks and hard limits; I wouldn’t write graphic gore or sexual violence. More trivially, I don’t see myself ever getting really into writing straight romance or smut. I just have...
  6. LadyIsak

    The Partner Character Type

    I much prefer to write same-gender relationships; I strongly dislike it when the love interest in gay or lesbian romance is, for lack of a better way to describe it, so nice and likeable and fluffy that they’ve got all the spice and personality of blancmange pudding — I prefer writing messy...
  7. LadyIsak

    filtering!!! wat u think?

    I think filtering is a useful tool — sometimes you do want to establish a character is uncertain about what exactly it is they’re experiencing, and sometimes you can’t avoid using “think” verbs … but it’s a tool that gets pretty grating when applied indiscriminately. I certainly don’t practise...
  8. LadyIsak

    Have you ever done this

    I used to look back at my old work and find it unreadably bad — the effective ~pre-garbage lifespan seemed to be numbered in weeks, if not days. Eventually, though, I got to the point where I don’t hate things I’d written … as long as they weren’t written prior to about the middle of 2016...
  9. LadyIsak

    Feedback/Review Request!

    Could you please clarify what you mean by “name-dropping”? I’m not familiar with the term in a crit context, I’ve only heard it used it to mean, “mentioning famous people you know, to impress someone”.
  10. LadyIsak

    Update on the dental situation: an old amalgam filling fell out. No root canal necessary!

    Update on the dental situation: an old amalgam filling fell out. No root canal necessary!
  11. LadyIsak

    First Person Or Third Person for two character litrpg?

    My personal choice would be first person, or close/limited third person — third person where you stick to the perspective of one character per scene/chapter, but the more important question I guess is: which do you prefer? Would you prefer to experiment with first person narration or stick to...
  12. LadyIsak

    Feedback/Review Request!

    A heads up: the serial is in large part gay smut. If you’re turned off by that, that’s not a problem — I just think it’s common courtesy to flag this kind of thing, and the available tags on the site don’t actually apply. BL connotes things I’m not doing with the story, hence I left that tag...
  13. LadyIsak

    Have you written using a voice to text feature, or considered doing so?

    I haven’t, because I still have something of a foreign accent and Speech-To-Text doesn’t quite work as well as typing — plus, to be honest, I’m rather too shy to actively recite my work like that. I do have friends who’ve successfully used Speech-To-Text to write, and it works great for them...
  14. LadyIsak

    Recommendations Your works?

    I’m writing a New Weird gay romance, about revolution, cruising/bar culture and necromancy — that last part will turn up in the next few updates https://www.scribblehub.com/series/377889/the-bitter-drop/
  15. LadyIsak

    So after three weeks of writing a minimum of 4k words a week, of course I end up having a dental...

    So after three weeks of writing a minimum of 4k words a week, of course I end up having a dental emergency of the "act now or lose half your jaw next month" variety. Yeeeesh. Hoping to avoid a root canal so I can get a late update out, if nothing else.
  16. LadyIsak

    Thank you! <3

    Thank you! <3
  17. LadyIsak

    Is this so wrong

    I shamelessly have long paragraphs of descriptions of characters, right in the main text, and I recommend other writers try it if character appearance is important to the story — or to the PoV character.
  18. LadyIsak

    Oh, I'm probably living here permanently! Russia's not really an option, the old country isn't...

    Oh, I'm probably living here permanently! Russia's not really an option, the old country isn't too fond of returning emigres in the first place, and I'm already a gay Jew so, ehhh.
  19. LadyIsak

    Living here, at least ;P I’m Russian + a Republic of Ireland citizen, but been living in the...

    Living here, at least ;P I’m Russian + a Republic of Ireland citizen, but been living in the Lothians for like five years now~
  20. LadyIsak

    How old are you all.

    Old enough that my birth certificate was issued in the Soviet Union, young enough to have gone to kindergarten in the Russian Federation.
Top