LillianAshcroft
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I have never written a sex scene before until now ( much less a Yaoi Shotacon Threesome ) and I desperately need feedback on the scene so I can improve and get better. Would any of you please be willing to read the chapter and then tell me what you think? It would mean the world to me. The chapter in question is the most recent chapter ( In-Flight Happy Meal ) of my story the Eternal Chronicles: The Long Dark Road. Please please help me.
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