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  1. Rinne1412

    I'm bored. . . . Might as well eat some snacks while I'm at it. [IMG]

    I'm bored. . . . Might as well eat some snacks while I'm at it.
  2. Rinne1412

    But @Aaqil you can't protect everyone with your cookies. No?

    But @Aaqil you can't protect everyone with your cookies. No?
  3. Rinne1412

    That explained the cookies crumbs all over the victim!! GUILTY!! [IMG]

    That explained the cookies crumbs all over the victim!! GUILTY!!
  4. Rinne1412

    Now that is being biased towards bears rights

    Now that is being biased towards bears rights
  5. Rinne1412

    Maybe because of the viewers/translators are chinese and korean?

    Maybe because of the viewers/translators are chinese and korean?
  6. Rinne1412

    heh *insert anya smug face

    heh *insert anya smug face
  7. Rinne1412

    F

    F
  8. Rinne1412

    Yeah, you can't escape it. They are always there. [IMG]

    Yeah, you can't escape it. They are always there.
  9. Rinne1412

    I've severely underestimated it. I shouldn't have gone so complacent with my status. I should...

    I've severely underestimated it. I shouldn't have gone so complacent with my status. I should have seen beyond that. What was my brain thinking at that time. . . *evil laughter intensifies
  10. Rinne1412

    I'm suprised even after years it's still going on.

    I'm suprised even after years it's still going on.
  11. Rinne1412

    How to make a decent intro that somehow don't fail you.

    I reread some of my earlier book chapter and realized that they are kinda shit. Not something to be proud of anyways but how do you make a decent character introduction as well including subtle world building. The genre is on post apocalytic world
  12. Rinne1412

    Hahahahaha. . . . . I shall get my fair share of amusement as...

    Hahahahaha. . . . . I shall get my fair share of amusement as well!:blob_cookie::blob_cookie::blob_cookie:
  13. Rinne1412

    Wait that show still ongoing?!

    Wait that show still ongoing?!
  14. Rinne1412

    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Hmm....the problems was exactly what I thought. I'm quite new in writing so I can't really be sure if any of what I written will be flawed but an opinion from someone who is experienced is really welcomed. I do having some troubles on switching on writing different POV but the entire review was...
  15. Rinne1412

    Interesting powers/abilities for a Seaweed Demon.

    Power to make endless weed and control all the weeds in sea:blobrofl:
  16. Rinne1412

    Hmm so I can commit mass terrorism by eating cookies in front of someone. . . . *[IMG]

    Hmm so I can commit mass terrorism by eating cookies in front of someone. . . . *
  17. Rinne1412

    Hmmm how do you use this thing? *tinkering with profile page

    Hmmm how do you use this thing? *tinkering with profile page
  18. Rinne1412

    Yet another free feedback thread.

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/549532/records-of-the-regressor/ I prefer if your feedback is more detailed. The more errors I know the more I could fix them before it's too late. Receiving the feedback here would be fine as well.
  19. Rinne1412

    Synopsis rewritten but it felt off?

    Damn look like writing even a simple synopsis is harder than writing a new chapter for my novel.
  20. Rinne1412

    Synopsis rewritten but it felt off?

    I rewritten my synopsis as per advice. I took my time to carefully write it yet it felt as something was missing. Not sure what it could be tho. Any tips? Here the revamped synopsis: Have you ever wondered what it would felt like to be abandoned? Left behind, forgotten by the sands of time...
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