Rinne1412
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I rewritten my synopsis as per advice. I took my time to carefully write it yet it felt as something was missing. Not sure what it could be tho. Any tips?
Here the revamped synopsis:
Have you ever wondered what it would felt like to be abandoned? Left behind, forgotten by the sands of time.
Despair, anger, helplessness. These emotions coursed through my mind as I walked against the path destined by fate. I had none by my side, memories of the distant past were nothing but a dream. Was this power a curse or a blessing? Holding immense power yet unable to even change even the course of future. I stood against them, alone in the broken empty world. When will I finally rest peacefully?
The sense of dread, despair,helplessness overcame my mind as I welcomed death once again.
Here the revamped synopsis:
Have you ever wondered what it would felt like to be abandoned? Left behind, forgotten by the sands of time.
Despair, anger, helplessness. These emotions coursed through my mind as I walked against the path destined by fate. I had none by my side, memories of the distant past were nothing but a dream. Was this power a curse or a blessing? Holding immense power yet unable to even change even the course of future. I stood against them, alone in the broken empty world. When will I finally rest peacefully?
The sense of dread, despair,helplessness overcame my mind as I welcomed death once again.