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Chapters 21-23 are up. 22, 23 and 24 (the last one currently live on my Patreon) are somewhat more lewd, mostly because there's only been two lewd scenes and big gaps between them, so I decided to make up for that.

I swear, I keep forgetting to update this thread. But the story has reached Chapter 20, so you've got plenty of material to catch up on.

I forgot to update this, but Chapter 11 and Chapter 12 are both up. Next chapter is gonna take this story past the 50K word milestone, so that's nice.

Chapter 10 is public. Estella and Jay run into a strange encounter while out on patrol.

Chapter 9 is now public! 10 is on my Patreon. This is the point where the story actually gets lewd, now that things have cooled down just a little bit.

A bit late, but Chapter 9 is now on my Patreon. I'll try and aim for a weekly update schedule, with each new chapter going up on Patreon first for patrons before becoming public when the subsequent chapter is finished.

It was probably high time I made a thread here. I've updated Henshin Sisters with Chapter 8, nearly hit 30,000 words, so that's neat. I plan on getting back to writing chapters at least once or twice a week, hopefully. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/546759/henshin-sisters/ As well, I'll...

Thanks, mate! There always was meant to be a bit of camp, but not that much camp. Though I'm also asking if the Chapter 1 following that works as an in-tandem introductory chapter for introducing the protagonists as well.

Thanks a lot, I appreciate the feedback, though in this case I revised it again based on some other feedback, along with a brand new first chapter that's shorter than the original but starts off in a more interesting way and doles out information in a less clunky fashion. Basically, the villain...

No worries, it's all good. And yeah, I have a bit of a perfectionist bug in me as well sometimes. Anyhow, first things first, I decided to try the villain opening scene, and I've attached what I wrote for it. I think it came out pretty well, it doesn't reveal a ton about the villain's...

Well, it seems like the best way to do that is to skip the morning rise and go straight to the campus, but still sometime before lunch break. Right off the top of my head for each of defining characteristics that could be utilized... Estella: She's an outgoing party gal and a social butterfly...

Right, no worries, I'll give all of that stuff a look-over when I have time, thanks. And yeah, thanks a lot, I was a kid of the 90s and early 2000s, so stuff like Power Rangers, Sailor Moon, Cardcaptors, DBZ, TMNT, Pokemon, Digimon, the DCAU, etc. were my bread and butter growing up. And more...

The original first chapter actually ended up becoming chapter 2, which is mostly the same, aside from excising unnecessary exposition and descriptions. The main problem with it is that I was told it was too mundane in its start. But in general I guess the general approach of an "action opening"...

I imagine you missed my last post since it took a while to be approved, but it's not a huge deal anyway since I got some feedback from another long-time author and I inserted a new, short first chapter as a in media res scene anyhow, in order to establish the plot and what it's generally about...

You mind taking a look at my story's first chapter? I feel I did something right in focusing on establishing the main characters first and foremost, even if I had to jump between their perspectives in the middle of the actual chapter. I wanted to establish who they were and enough of their core...

G'Day folks, I'm Candescence, I just posted the first three chapters of my adult novel "Henshin Sisters", which first I drafted as a completed NaNoWriMo novel before I was advised by folks who read it to rework it into something smaller in scope. It's a hybrid sci-fi/fantasy story with three...