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[greyblob]

I did a third part! XD https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZytxOYm1E9d5YRRJZf6Ofu6NakW3DwiiRpNXPmjNNAA/edit?usp=sharing

very nice. like the personalities. I can work with that.

 

[esThr]

Hmm, actually lemme work on the next part! Should be able to do it tmr I'll see what I can do...

 

[greyblob]

Hmm, actually lemme work on the next part! Should be able to do it tmr I'll see what I can do...

next chapter is mine kiddo

i'll try to finish it (or most of it) by tomorrow so you pick up right away
@esThr if you have already started or want to do this, go ahead. I am not that far in yet. just let me know

 

[esThr]

next chapter is mine kiddo

i'll try to finish it (or most of it) by tomorrow so you pick up right away
@esThr if you have already started or want to do this, go ahead. I am not that far in yet. just let me know

Dw you can take it I'm just trying to read up on it and thinking of ways to write it

 

[esThr]

After a not so careful consideration and a quick read of the existing 3 parts, I'm absolutely glad Blob took p4.

God.. what have I dug myself into...

 

[greyblob]

it is finished. late as all authors are.
not sure how i feel about this. Second part was kinda rushed. Turned somewhat serious. Good luck to the next person dealing with this

Envy me four

Tiny orange dots gleamed through the blackness of the night. They covered the hilltop like a blanket. A much bigger blanket than Evelyn remembered. With highwalls, watch towers, and stationed guards. "This is new…" She muttered. A sudden movement almost made her flinch. She barely stopped her ar...

docs.google.com

scraped version (1st part is the same)

Envy me four scraped

Tiny orange dots gleamed through the blackness of the night. They covered the hilltop like a blanket. A much bigger blanket than Evelyn remembered. With highwalls, watch towers, and stationed guards. "This is new…" She muttered. A sudden movement almost made her flinch. She barely stopped her ar...

docs.google.com

 

[RepresentingEnvy]

it is finished. late as all authors are.
not sure how i feel about this. Second part was kinda rushed. Turned somewhat serious. Good luck to the next person dealing with this

Envy me four

Tiny orange dots gleamed through the blackness of the night. They covered the hilltop like a blanket. A much bigger blanket than Evelyn remembered. With highwalls, watch towers, and stationed guards. "This is new…" She muttered. A sudden movement almost made her flinch. She barely stopped her ar...

docs.google.com

scraped version (1st part is the same)

Envy me four scraped

Tiny orange dots gleamed through the blackness of the night. They covered the hilltop like a blanket. A much bigger blanket than Evelyn remembered. With highwalls, watch towers, and stationed guards. "This is new…" She muttered. A sudden movement almost made her flinch. She barely stopped her ar...

docs.google.com

This was an entertaining read. I like the relationship that she has with the rat. There is always that one servant that grates. Also, she said the thing! She said, "bleh!"

Thank you for the chapter, Sir Saint Blob!

 

[SailusGebel]

@esThr @Sylver Are you still interested in writing a new chapter?

 

[esThr]

Endeed

it is finished. late as all authors are.
not sure how i feel about this. Second part was kinda rushed. Turned somewhat serious. Good luck to the next person dealing with this

Envy me four

Tiny orange dots gleamed through the blackness of the night. They covered the hilltop like a blanket. A much bigger blanket than Evelyn remembered. With highwalls, watch towers, and stationed guards. "This is new…" She muttered. A sudden movement almost made her flinch. She barely stopped her ar...

docs.google.com

I'm screwed.

 

[SailusGebel]

Endeed

I'm screwed.

If you want, I can do the fifth chapter, and you will write after me.

 

[esThr]

If you want, I can do the fifth chapter, and you will write after me.

Dw I can work with it.

It's just that I'll likely need 2 chapters back to back for it now

Spoiler: Heh.

planning to turn Lucille into the yandere one heh.

 

[SailusGebel]

Dw I can work with it.

It's just that I'll likely need 2 chapters back to back for it now

Spoiler: Heh.

planning to turn Lucille into the yandere one heh.

You can start writing it, and if you feel like it is not working out, or you don't have enough time, ping me.

 

[esThr]

God... that took me way longer than I imagined (due to pokerogue addiction but AHEM!) well either way... I am not proud of it and its only chap 5... I still will work on 6 with hopefully a better speed.

Envy me the fifth

I woke up to an unfamiliar ceiling. “Ah, right! The goblin!” I was disappointed in myself. I passed out from the sight of a goblin close up. I am supposed to be a vampire now, yet my sense of disgust overtook my hunger for blood. In my eyes, that is the biggest embarrassment that could happen to...

docs.google.com

that being said... hope it wasn't too much of a dumpster fire (Technically the first chap that I shared with anyone)

 

[Sylver]

@esThr @Sylver Are you still interested in writing a new chapter?

I am, just have some questions first should I ask here or over DMs?

 

[SailusGebel]

I am, just have some questions first should I ask here or over DMs?

Do what is more comfortable to you.

 

[Omnifarious]

 

[SailusGebel]

 

[RepresentingEnvy]

God... that took me way longer than I imagined (due to pokerogue addiction but AHEM!) well either way... I am not proud of it and its only chap 5... I still will work on 6 with hopefully a better speed.

Envy me the fifth

I woke up to an unfamiliar ceiling. “Ah, right! The goblin!” I was disappointed in myself. I passed out from the sight of a goblin close up. I am supposed to be a vampire now, yet my sense of disgust overtook my hunger for blood. In my eyes, that is the biggest embarrassment that could happen to...

docs.google.com

that being said... hope it wasn't too much of a dumpster fire (Technically the first chap that I shared with anyone)

Thanks for the chapter, but I have some concerns. The more we focus on the perspective of other characters, the more we are moving away from the MC. The MC was supposed to be the villainess vampire, and the characters are doing a flip.

Evylen feels more like a saintess than a vampire. She also seems very uncertain of herself with the stuttering and what not. Before, the reverence from the townspeople felt more sadistic, like a pig's greed for their queen after charming them, but now they revere her. Lucille also changed from what she felt like initially, from her playful self, but I also wouldn't describe the current Lucille as a yandere. The character Mordred feels different, too. In Blob's chapter he doesn't seem the type that would sing endless praises for "my lady."

 

[esThr]

Thanks for the chapter, but I have some concerns. The more we focus on the perspective of other characters, the more we are moving away from the MC. The MC was supposed to be the villainess vampire, and the characters are doing a flip.

Evylen feels more like a saintess than a vampire. She also seems very uncertain of herself with the stuttering and what not. Before, the reverence from the townspeople felt more sadistic, like a pig's greed for their queen after charming them, but now they revere her. Lucille also changed from what she felt like initially, from her playful self, but I also wouldn't describe the current Lucille as a yandere. The character Mordred feels different, too. In Blob's chapter he doesn't seem the type that would sing endless praises for "my lady."

Makes sense, I discussed with blob and sailus too. Didnt really like how it turned out myself, so it would be best if he retake chapter 5 in my opinion

I can always take a future chapter where I have more context