Anyone wants feedback for feedback?

[kallistoclesx]

I'm a new x100 writer and I'm starting out. I would really like a review of this isekai story I'm working on. Like the things I need to work more on.

To return the favour, I would love to read your story as well. So that it's a friendly constructive criticism.

Let me know if anyone is interested :)

Ah the link- https://www.scribblehub.com/series/447777/the-fall-of-davina-st-rose/

 

[Elixer_Yuu]

Ryt, i want one.

I Am Happy

I was born and I died. I was born again, and I died again. There was something missing. I tried but I couldn't fill the gap. All I wanted to do was to lead a happy life. My discord ID- Yuu#0299 -The cover doesn't belong to me. Whoever the owner...

www.scribblehub.com

There are not so.msny chapters, only three or four, do it shouldn't take so much time.
Thnx

 

[kallistoclesx]

Ryt, i want one.

I Am Happy

I was born and I died. I was born again, and I died again. There was something missing. I tried but I couldn't fill the gap. All I wanted to do was to lead a happy life. My discord ID- Yuu#0299 -The cover doesn't belong to me. Whoever the owner...

www.scribblehub.com

There are not so.msny chapters, only three or four, do it shouldn't take so much time.
Thnx

will give you a buzz once i go through it :)

 

[Lloyd]

I would but then I saw the GL tag. :(

 

[Elixer_Yuu]

will give you a buzz once i go through it :)

K thnx

 

[hartetg]

The Rising Phoenix – A Tang Dynasty Novel | Scribble Hub

 

[Yi_San]

I'm a new x100 writer and I'm starting out. I would really like a review of this isekai story I'm working on. Like the things I need to work more on.

To return the favour, I would love to read your story as well. So that it's a friendly constructive criticism.

Let me know if anyone is interested :)

Ah the link- https://www.scribblehub.com/series/447777/the-fall-of-davina-st-rose/

How about reading mine? Only one short chapter. Here's the link

I transmigrated - That Sucks! | Scribble Hub

www.scribblehub.com

 

[MoonlitSonata]

I'm interested. & tryout mine too ! My novel.