Alienix
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I started a new story and I need some feedbacks
Name: Aterheim
Genre: Fantasy, Action, Adventure, Romance, Harem, Xuanhuan
Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/9977/aterheim/
Synopsis:
In the world where magic exist, the seed of chaos slowly grew. The titan emerged to the surface; the birth of true dragon that would bring catastrophe; rebellion against the ruler of the sky, skians; political wars between wizards; the discovery of the necromancer’s treasures.
Amongst it, there were the existance of the cursed man. They couldn’t live past fifty years and bore curse that tormented them. They were just a little threat compared to the other big problem.
Allen, a twenty years old man, wanted to become a wizard to extend his life and searched for the way to get rid of his curse. He participated a war against the Wyrm King that took place in Azrot Forest for the early prize, a grimoire that could assist him opening his ater veins, the first step to become a wizard.
Name: Aterheim
Genre: Fantasy, Action, Adventure, Romance, Harem, Xuanhuan
Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/9977/aterheim/
Synopsis:
In the world where magic exist, the seed of chaos slowly grew. The titan emerged to the surface; the birth of true dragon that would bring catastrophe; rebellion against the ruler of the sky, skians; political wars between wizards; the discovery of the necromancer’s treasures.
Amongst it, there were the existance of the cursed man. They couldn’t live past fifty years and bore curse that tormented them. They were just a little threat compared to the other big problem.
Allen, a twenty years old man, wanted to become a wizard to extend his life and searched for the way to get rid of his curse. He participated a war against the Wyrm King that took place in Azrot Forest for the early prize, a grimoire that could assist him opening his ater veins, the first step to become a wizard.