Beautiful World - First chapters feedback

[edouardartus]

I have a first full manuscript ready and am looking for feedback on the first few chapters.
If anybody would be willing to spend a bit of time to download and read them that would be really nice and appreciated.

Quick Story info : Beautiful World is a unique and ambitious science fiction drama novel with a story and visuals that will hook you until the very end.
Follow the lives of the individuals that will shape destruction, hope, terror and change in a world where body image is everything and only the most beautiful can sit at its apex.

Link > https://www.beautifulworldofficial.com/ then press "start reading it" button at the top left

Thank you and hope you like it.

Cover picture is below