LittleRedTopHat
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I have nothing to do so I made this thread to give feedback on stories.
When reading I usually keep in mind plot holes, the way the story flows, character interactions, world-building, MC's personality, and whether or not if something feels to adrupt such as characters change of actions that rapidly lead to friendship, love interests, and etc.
When writing a book you create the foundation of the story in the beginning of the first couple of chapters that not only have to draw in the reader to make them want more but also the logic within the story that you set.
The logic of majority of stories should still follow the flow in the real world such as relationships, personalities, and actions that coalign with a characters personality.
For example:
Imagine a character named Jordan, who is initially shown as a quiet, logical person who likes being alone and avoids parties. Despite this, Jordan starts participating in debates, joining group projects, and making spur-of-the-moment choices. This change surprises the readers, as it doesn't match the earlier description of Jordan as introverted and logical. This difference between Jordan's actions and how they're described in the story makes us think about how characters are presented in books.
When reading I usually keep in mind plot holes, the way the story flows, character interactions, world-building, MC's personality, and whether or not if something feels to adrupt such as characters change of actions that rapidly lead to friendship, love interests, and etc.
When writing a book you create the foundation of the story in the beginning of the first couple of chapters that not only have to draw in the reader to make them want more but also the logic within the story that you set.
The logic of majority of stories should still follow the flow in the real world such as relationships, personalities, and actions that coalign with a characters personality.
For example:
Imagine a character named Jordan, who is initially shown as a quiet, logical person who likes being alone and avoids parties. Despite this, Jordan starts participating in debates, joining group projects, and making spur-of-the-moment choices. This change surprises the readers, as it doesn't match the earlier description of Jordan as introverted and logical. This difference between Jordan's actions and how they're described in the story makes us think about how characters are presented in books.
Here be mine: 
