KingMusa
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Hello citizens of ScribbleHub Forum, i come seeking feedback on my story! it currently has 7 chapters, and each chapter is bellow 2000 words, so they are quick and easy to get through. please come check it out and leave constructive feed backs, pointing out what i can improve on, or what you like about my work!
Grand Adventure! Click Here!
Here is a synopsis:
On the small island of Oak, Kojo helps his family Tavern, known as Maple. Maple Tavern is a popular hot spot for all sorts of adventurers and travelers to come visit and rest up.
Kojo, not knowing much beyond his small hub island, would be fascinated by the countless stories that the adventurers would tell. He would listen to at least 10 different stories in one sitting, before being shooed off to bed by his Grandpa.
Years pass and Kojo grows up to be a strong and resilient young man, with an honest heart. Inspired by all the stories he had heard as a child, Kojo is filled with hunger, no, starvation to start his own Epic Adventure, exploring the world to its fullest, as it's the only way to fill his starvation.
Inspired by his Master, Kojo embarks on his epic journey to join a guild known as Grand Adventure. A famous guild, that'll allow him to Explore the world to his heart's content.
Follow Kojo, as he explores the wonders and tragedies of the world, improving his skills, growing his experience, and making lots of bonds on the way to live a story that will be remembered for all the years to come after.
This story is heavily Shonen-inspired, so yes I will be using a lot of clichè Shounen tropes. Since it's an adventure story, be prepared for a bunch of random adventures.
Grand Adventure! Click Here!
Grand Adventure! Click Here!
Here is a synopsis:
On the small island of Oak, Kojo helps his family Tavern, known as Maple. Maple Tavern is a popular hot spot for all sorts of adventurers and travelers to come visit and rest up.
Kojo, not knowing much beyond his small hub island, would be fascinated by the countless stories that the adventurers would tell. He would listen to at least 10 different stories in one sitting, before being shooed off to bed by his Grandpa.
Years pass and Kojo grows up to be a strong and resilient young man, with an honest heart. Inspired by all the stories he had heard as a child, Kojo is filled with hunger, no, starvation to start his own Epic Adventure, exploring the world to its fullest, as it's the only way to fill his starvation.
Inspired by his Master, Kojo embarks on his epic journey to join a guild known as Grand Adventure. A famous guild, that'll allow him to Explore the world to his heart's content.
Follow Kojo, as he explores the wonders and tragedies of the world, improving his skills, growing his experience, and making lots of bonds on the way to live a story that will be remembered for all the years to come after.
This story is heavily Shonen-inspired, so yes I will be using a lot of clichè Shounen tropes. Since it's an adventure story, be prepared for a bunch of random adventures.
Grand Adventure! Click Here!