Distant Leaps to Circinus

[Khailz]

Hello everyone, I am Khailz and I enjoy writing my only fiction Distant Leaps to Circinus, in my pastime. So far I think it's done okay on other sites, but I still lack feedback in some areas. I would really appreciate more word on how I am doing. The first 5 or 6 chapters were when I first began writing in October, so they are a bit choppy at times, otherwise I think I have improved in the long run.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/5592/distant-leaps-to-circinus/