Para23
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Heyyy, if anyone is available to give some constructive criticism or leave a review on my book that'd be great! Before I drown in the seas of writers block lol. I'm honestly loosing motivation by the minute (cuz of school), maybe even criticism can bring it back? Possibly?
Anyways, my story is a transmigration(Not really) Fantasy/ horror mix kind of thing focussing on Japanese mythology as well as mafia like corruption in the post apocalyptic pre transmigration world. Maybe you'll like it? Maybe you won't. Tell me either way! I need the feedback, no matter how harsh it is!
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/744621/fates-redacted/
Anyways, my story is a transmigration(Not really) Fantasy/ horror mix kind of thing focussing on Japanese mythology as well as mafia like corruption in the post apocalyptic pre transmigration world. Maybe you'll like it? Maybe you won't. Tell me either way! I need the feedback, no matter how harsh it is!
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/744621/fates-redacted/