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Owl Who Reads · Hoot Hoot
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Welcome to the resident vampire's feedback thread RepresentingEnvy here to give all of the mortals feedback on their novels. If you have stumbled across a feedback thread before, then you should understand. Still, I am here to give you the obligatory explanation. I will provide feedback on the first chapter of your novel, and if I enjoy it I might read further. Keep in mind that this will all be my subjective opinion as a reader first.
DisclaimerI am not a professional Reviewer/author. All of this will be my own subjective opinion. If you don't agree with my review/rating, you are free to dismiss it entirely. I am just a biased vampy.
Rules
I will provide feedback on at least the first chapter of your novel. You will put the link to the novel you want reviewed. You will tell me if you want the review in the thread or in a PM (If neither is specified the review will go in thread). Stories I won't read: Mind break, Mind Control, R*pe (Basically anything that doesn't involve consent in sexual acts. PS: This includes the sexualization of lolis.) The first score provided will be writing enjoyment (how much I enjoy your prose/style) on a scale of 1/5 . Example: Writing Enjoyment: (Max Score) The second score will be how much I personally enjoyed the story. This will be on a scale of 1/5 . Example: Personal Enjoyment: (Max Score) The last rating will be how much I think your story will appeal to a general audience. This will be on a scale of 1/5 . Example: Appeal: (Max Score)Bleh-Bleh, Bleh
Be patient if you want feedback.
Don't take my review as gospel.
Lowly Ascent
Within a desolate realm, where discarded worlds were stitched together, a rupture tore open, releasing a small child into this fragmented expanse. Above him, the sky revealed three eerie moons, while an ominous black mass loomed ominously in their wake. Disoriented and engulfed by a putrid...
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