Feedback for my story

royalnobody

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Hi, I just wanted to ask for feedback for my story about a girl who found a sword that can talk. It's more or less just a slice of life story about a girl and her new friend trying to pass school, with a few nonsensical conversations and some more meaningful and maybe making a friend and not two. Just seven chapters for now, each about 2-3k words long. Thank you.

 
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