PeacefulMyst
In your heart~
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Until now, I had been writing whatever first came to mind. Or just writing a jumbled mess of my friend's ideas. And I didn't often edit it much. Even if it sucked.
But only recently did i start like actually trying to plan ahead and be serious (which i suck at.) Mainly because I really want to finish this story I have in mind and want it to be like not trash. And it is. The first chapter just feels extremely bland and I can't spot anything that needs improving myself. And I don't have an active reader base. That's why can someone please tell me what can I do to improve the first chapter? Thank you (btw. it's isekai and a bit edgy.)
one of the main things i greatly want feedback on is the mc. Because I tried making him have personality. I just... Hope I succeed a little bit
anyways here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/432790-the-reader-of-souls/chapter/432890/
I just came here because the people I know made it seem like its actually good
But only recently did i start like actually trying to plan ahead and be serious (which i suck at.) Mainly because I really want to finish this story I have in mind and want it to be like not trash. And it is. The first chapter just feels extremely bland and I can't spot anything that needs improving myself. And I don't have an active reader base. That's why can someone please tell me what can I do to improve the first chapter? Thank you (btw. it's isekai and a bit edgy.)
one of the main things i greatly want feedback on is the mc. Because I tried making him have personality. I just... Hope I succeed a little bit
anyways here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/432790-the-reader-of-souls/chapter/432890/
I just came here because the people I know made it seem like its actually good