feedback pls

[Ahrihn]

I'm wondering if the novel I'm writing, Blackbird's, beginning chapters are engaging. Like, is the Prologue something I should keep, discard, or edit? Just some general feedback, I suppose, esp. for characters and if enough plot is present in the chapters. Also, is my premise something commonly seen, and if so, how? I just see a lot of people complaining about system/quick wear, so I want to avoid any pits.
Please do read the content warnings/notes before providing feedback though (it is a GL).
Feedback greatly appreciated!