Synopsis:
This isn't the type of story I like to read, so keep in mind what point of view I'm coming from.
I think the synopsis would be more engaging if you gave the organization a name. Like,
However, those plans were ruined when a group of spirits calling themselves the Death Row abducted...
since it gives them a face. Or:
However, those plans were ruined when a group of spirits abducted and forced him to join their organization: Death Row, where they solve crimes and mysteries for other spirits.
Also, you're being a bit redundant by combining "Not remembering anything" and "amnesiac." You can replace amnesiac with "nameless."
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As a whole, the story wasn't appealing to me at first blush (since the tags wasn't to my liking), and the synopsis didn't jump out at me.
However, as I read it over again, I found that it was kind of interesting, with Bungo Stray Dogs vibes (try to check out the synopsis for that as a reference?). I became interested in what the afterlife was like, and what the other spirits were like.
What I wasn't interested in was the protagonist, since he's faceless except for his debauchery. I don't know what's special about him, I don't know why he's kidnapped. He needs to be sold to the audience as something worth reading more about.
Chapter 1:
Right off the bat, the protagonist has a "give no fucks" personality, which isn't bad. But still, not my type, as I'm not really a fan of pervert. Really interesting though, and assuming I do like perverts, his unashamed peeking is golden.
His reaction to the "tall, buff dude" is funny too, although "Stop, you idiot" needs an exclamation mark.
I could really use elaboration on the nightmarish appearance.
Reading on, it's hilarious. The egg is funny, trolling the protagonist, and even though I don't like the protagonist all that much, I might stick around for the egg. Might. I'll read the next chapter and see if I like it, but that's no longer in the scope of this.
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This is no Bungo Stray Dogs, but it's still really funny. The writing clear and the egg is quite charming. Depending on the reader (not me) the protagonist is really funny and fun to read about, so if you're reaching the right audience the first chapter is probably a 4.5/5, while for me it was personally 3/5 simply because the protagonist doesn't appeal (for reasons mentioned above).
I like it
so far.
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