Writing Prompt Finish The Story: "What Is Your Name?"

[dummycake]

After you set her down, she thanked you.

It wasn't everyday that a person did something like that for her.

You turned around, ready to return, but she stopped you, saying "Wait!"

With hesitation, she asked:

"What is your name?"

 

[RepresentingEnvy]

It wasn't every day that someone did something like that, especially towards someone like her.

If you want to get rid of the some problem. You could cut out this sentence.

 

[Sleds]

I don't really have a good idea for this one. lets go with some bullshit.




After you set her down, she thanked you.

It wasn't every day that someone did something like that, especially towards someone like her.

You turned around, ready to return, but she stopped you, saying "Wait!"

With hesitation, she asked:

"What is your name?"

"If we met tonight, you can call me daddy."

 

[dummycake]

If you want to get rid of the some problem. You could cut out this sentence.

it added a piece of lore though :(

I don't really have a good idea for this one. lets go with some bullshit.




After you set her down, she thanked you.

It wasn't every day that someone did something like that, especially towards someone like her.

You turned around, ready to return, but she stopped you, saying "Wait!"

With hesitation, she asked:

"What is your name?"

"If we met tonight, you can call me daddy."

NO

 

[RepresentingEnvy]

it added a piece of lore though :(

NO

That was just one suggestion. You could also rewrite it like: it wasn't everyday that a person did something for her.

 

[dummycake]

That was just one suggestion. You could also rewrite it like: it wasn't everyday that a person did something for her.

thxxx that's better.

 

[RepresentingEnvy]

After you set her down, she thanked you.

It wasn't everyday that a person did something for her.

You turned around, ready to return, but she stopped you, saying "Wait!"

With hesitation, she asked:

"What is your name?"

"My name...it's Pepe, The Cowfrog."

 

[dummycake]

"My name...it's Pepe, The Cowfrog."

I'm taking all of my reactions back

 

[Sleds]

it added a piece of lore though :(

NO

ok

 

[SomethingStuffHappend]

“The name John, John Doe”
And just like that we never saw each other again.

 

[RepresentingEnvy]

“The name John, John Doe”
And just like that we never saw each other again.

"My name is Biscuits, Vegan Biscuits"

 

[SomethingStuffHappend]

Tips Cowboy hat
“Well Ms.Biscuits I have to go it was a pleasure meeting you”
Walks out into the distance

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

"My name is Biscuits, Vegan Biscuits"

"Vegan Biscuits?" she asked softly.
"Yes?" You asked, turning your head back to see her serious, yet blushing, face.
"M-m-my name is Pizza de Vegetarian... it was nice to get to know you," she stuttered out.
"I- it was nice to get to know you too..." you said shyly, a hint of disbelief that she liked you emblazoned on your cheeks.
Later that night... alone at the campfire.
You winced.
Keeping the secret the entire date was... painful.
What was the secret?

 

[dummycake]

"Vegan Biscuits?" she asked softly.
"Yes?" You asked, turning your head back to see her serious, yet blushing, face.
"M-m-my name is Pizza de Vegetarian... it was nice to get to know you," she stuttered out.
"I- it was nice to get to know you too..." you said shyly, a hint of disbelief that she liked you emblazoned on your cheeks.
Later that night... alone at the campfire.
You winced.
Keeping the secret the entire date was... painful.
What was the secret?

what?

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

what?

I don’t know. You tell me.

 

[SomethingStuffHappend]

what?

I don’t know. You tell me.

Idk food? Everyone must be hungry

 

[Rhaps]

After you set her down, she thanked you.

It wasn't everyday that a person did something like that for her.

You turned around, ready to return, but she stopped you, saying "Wait!"

With hesitation, she asked:

"What is your name?"

"Your future husband, Dom.", put on sunglasses and rides off into the night.

 

[RepresentingEnvy]

"Vegan Biscuits?" she asked softly.
"Yes?" You asked, turning your head back to see her serious, yet blushing, face.
"M-m-my name is Pizza de Vegetarian... it was nice to get to know you," she stuttered out.
"I- it was nice to get to know you too..." you said shyly, a hint of disbelief that she liked you emblazoned on your cheeks.
Later that night... alone at the campfire.
You winced.
Keeping the secret the entire date was... painful.
What was the secret?

The secret was that, despite being Vegan Buscuits, I was really a carnivore.

 

[NotOriginal]

After you set her down, she thanked you.

It wasn't everyday that a person did something like that for her.

You turned around, ready to return, but she stopped you, saying "Wait!"

With hesitation, she asked:

"What is your name?"
"I'm John Done and I am done with this long series of events, conflicts, and character developments I can do without."
"... What? W-what do--"
"Goodbye."
*walks away*

So ends the story of John Done, A guy who is done with everything.

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

The secret was that, despite being Vegan Buscuits, I was really a carnivore.

*gasp*