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[Ash-kento]

I have recently posted "Loving is cursed". There are three chapters. Give it some of your precious time and let me know what you think of it.

 

[RepresentingEnvy]

I have recently posted "Loving is cursed". There are three chapters. Give it some of your precious time and let me know what you think of it.

You should put the link in thread.

 

[CreationWillL]

You should put the link in thread.

Loving is cursed

Join the intricate and alluring journey of two high school brats who upset the gods and end up with their bodies swapped! They are blessed enough to have friends that they can call 'family' but cursed enough that they ruin their standard school life and experience the cruel side of...

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[KingMusa]

Check out my first chapter!Elenora's Academy of Magicka: Ken Granfold