First chapter(s) Review

[APieceOfRock]

I've created a new novel and I want any feedbacks possible (even the bad ones) on how to improve my story (in this case, the first 2 chapters.)
Thanks in advance
(P/S: I don't know if the link works. Tell me if it doesn;t.)

Swordsmaster Fox-girl

Swordsmasters, Beings that have attained unrivaled power with the sword. They live, eat, sleep, and die with their swords. Swordsmaster Nova was one such being, fated to die on the battlefield with his sword. However, one faithful encounter with the Hero's party changed his life forever. He...

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