First time writer, need some feedback

[Storiesbyblacksheep]

Hello, I’m currently working on my first novel and looking for some feedback. This is a fantasy story set in a modern/semi-futuristic world. I’ve posted 7 chapters and would really appreciate if anyone wants to check it out and leave a review or comment to tell me what they like and don’t.

The Dissident Wants To Be A Hero

 

[LadyKitty]

Hey, sure. I'll look at your book tonight. Depending how long your chapters are. I might finish your seven chapters. I love your cover by the way. I'll email you about your feedback soon.

 

[Storiesbyblacksheep]

Hey, sure. I'll look at your book tonight. Depending how long your chapters are. I might finish your seven chapters. I love your cover by the way. I'll email you about your feedback soon.

Hey, thanks sorry I haven’t been on here in a while and just saw this.