Fully edited Action ghetto crime fiction book

[theartofwar901]

I edited the book the best I could, and made some improvements, and I also changed one part at the end of the book. I hope yall will enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it. Let me know what you think about it. Praise as well as criticisms as well as insults are all welcome. Let me know if you love it or if there is anything I need to improve upon. Don't worry I have thick skin. It is in the attachment to be downloaded as a pdf file.

 

[DonHon]

 

[theartofwar901]

Well, I'm glad the cat is excited.

 

[DonHon]

Read chapter 1, Very great I like it

 

[theartofwar901]

Read chapter 1, Very great I like it

Thank you.

 

[theartofwar901]

The book may not be most people on here's cup of tea. Most people here probably aren't interested in african american urban crime fiction, but I am curious to know if anyone has checked it out, even read it completely and what their personal opinions are on the book. Positive or negative. I'd love to get feedback on it. It was the first book I ever wrote, I just revised it to make it better.