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Rockingashe

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Hey everyone! I was hoping that you guys/gals would be gracious enough to look at my novel and see what you think? I haven't been writing lately because I ended up breaking my pinky finger at work and it's kept me back from writing. I released 2 chapters today and I was wondering what everyone's opinion is. Any feed back is helpful! Thank you all, and I hope you have a great day/night!

 
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RepresentingEnvy

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Hey everyone! I was hoping that you guys/gals would be gracious enough to look at my novel and see what you think? I haven't been writing lately because I ended up breaking my pinky finger at work and it's kept me back from writing. I released 2 chapters today and I was wondering what everyone's opinion is. Any feed back is helpful! Thank you all, and I hope you have a great day/night!
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