Help: Fourth wall breaking

TheLovelyFire

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I have a story that goes off in breaking the fourth wall similar to how the game Doki Doki Literature Club break the fourth wall continuously, basically in every chapter. I have two perspective one break the fourth wall and the other do not. To spoiled the plot before I even post it
The character know they are inside the story and can hear the author
I'm just wonder how to make a distinction other than changing the color of the text to who is it.
 

Elim

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Italics for the author. Or you can put brackets or the similar sort around it. [ ] Making sure to keep this consistent.
 

Phantomheart

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You could also go through the route of the author quoting everything in the characters perspective to note that their narrative is that of a character, similar to the narrative changes done in Heart of Darkness.
 

DocB

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If you still need help breaking walls after the third, then perhaps demolition isn't for you
 
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