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Finish the horror story: (What happens when she enters her mansion? Does she see something horrifying? Does something terrible occur?)

Moonlight crept against the manor’s walls—a dark painting faintly alit. The black mansion of stone towered above nearby trees, which had begun to shed their leaves. Cold wind buffeted the lord of the place before she entered the enormous passageway into the lobby, closing the large door behind her.
 

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Her crimson eyes scanned the hall, watching it gradually turn opaque, its existence fading away, melding into the moonlight. In a blink of an eye, she found herself standing on the edge of a cliff, moonlight enveloping her like a heavy cloak. The brilliance in her eyes was gradually suppressed, and the moonlight guided her forward. She took a step, and... realized the horror of a cliff hanger. :blobspearpeek:
 

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At least they finished it. This story has a bitter sweet ending.
Yes, a bittersweet ending.
Bittersweet, as in 99% as bitter as shit and 1% as sweet as a shitstained diabetic's piss.
Ending, as in skipping two arcs to rush to the finish line because they've redirected their efforts toward a newly acquired license for the newest popular series "Double Leveling."
 

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Her crimson eyes scanned the hall, watching it gradually turn opaque, its existence fading away, melding into the moonlight. In a blink of an eye, she found herself standing on the edge of a cliff, moonlight enveloping her like a heavy cloak. The brilliance in her eyes was gradually suppressed, and the moonlight guided her forward. She took a step, and... realized the horror of a cliff hanger. :blobspearpeek:
The sad part is they dropped the novel.
 

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Finish the horror story: (What happens when she enters her mansion? Does she see something horrifying? Does something terrible occur?)

Moonlight crept against the manor’s walls—a dark painting faintly alit. The black mansion of stone towered above nearby trees, which had begun to shed their leaves. Cold wind buffeted the lord of the place before she entered the enormous passageway into the lobby, closing the large door behind her.
And she saw...the number four. She screamed so hard her vocal cords burst and broke her jugular. R.I.P.
 

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Finish the horror story: (What happens when she enters her mansion? Does she see something horrifying? Does something terrible occur?)

Moonlight crept against the manor’s walls—a dark painting faintly alit. The black mansion of stone towered above nearby trees, which had begun to shed their leaves. Cold wind buffeted the lord of the place before she entered the enormous passageway into the lobby, closing the large door behind her.
She then began walking through the lobby, when she was around a minute away from the exit, she started feeling sick. Her vision then began to fade while her body began to feel weak. A servant then entered the lobby rushing over to help the lady.

"Are you okay?"

The lady felt her symptoms worsening but also felt as if she knew the problem. She knew what was going to occur would bring about tremendous ruin to not only her kingdom but possibly even the world.

She then pushes the concerned servant back while putting a hand over one of her eyes.

"Stand back, I'm beginning to MORB!"
 
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Finish the horror story: (What happens when she enters her mansion? Does she see something horrifying? Does something terrible occur?)

Moonlight crept against the manor’s walls—a dark painting faintly alit. The black mansion of stone towered above nearby trees, which had begun to shed their leaves. Cold wind buffeted the lord of the place before she entered the enormous passageway into the lobby, closing the large door behind her.
Moonlight crept against the manor’s walls—a dark painting faintly alit. The black mansion of stone towered above nearby trees, which had begun to shed their leaves. Cold wind buffeted the lord of the place before she entered the enormous passageway into the lobby, closing the large door behind her. “Mistress, it is time.” A voice called out. “There is no need for words servant. I am ready, but are you?” She responded. “Ye-“ ”I said there was no need for words. Go to the rest of your ilk.“ The servant’s face paled before they turned and fled up a stairway. The mistress slowly followed up those stairs, stairs littered with bone fragments.

The mistress went up and up five, six, seven flights of those bone laden stairs until she reached an exit to a balcony. She meandered her way onto the balcony’s outdoor platform, to look out at it. Three ‘human‘ faces met her gaze, faces pulled over the cone like heads of a snake, whose body mostly laid on the ground 40 meters below her.
“H “W “F
U I O
M S O
A H“ D”
N”
The faces spoke. Their ‘human’ visages warping like a puppet when it’s manipulator moves the puppet’s mouth. The mistress snapped her fingers, and a servant joined her on the balcony.
”H “S “S
U S S
M S” S”
A
N”
The left face spoke. The mistress took in a deep breath. “I wish to be young once more.” She spoke.
”S “W “S
S I S
S” S S”
H”
The second face spoke. The mistress walked over to the dazed servant, and pushed them towards the edge, twords the three faces.
”S “S “F
S S O
S“ S” O
D”
The servant fell to to the ground with a wet splat, as the third face spoke. The mistress backed away slowly as the eyes in front of her began to dim, the intelligence seeming to dissolve into nothing. “Wa-“ She never finished her words as the the snake feasted on her.
 

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She then began walking through the lobby, when she was around a minute away from the exit, she started feeling sick. Her vision then began to fade while her body began to feel weak. A servant then entered the lobby rushing over to help the lady.

"Are you okay?"

The lady felt her symptoms worsening but also felt as if she knew the problem. She knew what was going to occur would bring about tremendous ruin to not only her kingdom but possibly even the world.

She then pushes the concerned servant back while putting a hand over one of her eyes.

"Stand back, I'm beginning to MORB!"
The truth is there are only two sides of the world: either you are MORB-iyes or MORB-ino. Tightly clutching a reddish orb in hand, she recalled which side she was on.

"It's MORBin' time"

And she MORB'd on the servant and then everybody else
 

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Finish the horror story: (What happens when she enters her mansion? Does she see something horrifying? Does something terrible occur?)

Moonlight crept against the manor’s walls—a dark painting faintly alit. The black mansion of stone towered above nearby trees, which had begun to shed their leaves. Cold wind buffeted the lord of the place before she entered the enormous passageway into the lobby, closing the large door behind her.
A strange moaning could be heard.

Her brow knitted with a frown.

She tiptoed through the vast, empty kitchen, feeling oh so small.

"Ohhhh... yesssss... yesssss... MOMMY!" a familiar woman's voice tried to whisper, only for the woman well-known to her to end up shouting in ecstasy instead of her attempts at being quiet.

In the center of the kitchen, encircled by shadows growing and trembling into a crowd of silent haters, her lips trembled, a fang biting into the lower lip nervously. And as she passed out of the silver light, which filled the hollow space oh so dimly, her mouth tilted upside down. She could already figure where this was going. She didn't want to know.
Or at least, that was she told herself.
But she continued walking toward the upper bedroom-

"We need to finish before she gets h-OH YEAH! RIGHT THERE! GET YOUR STRAP R-mmmmm..."
"Oh? You like that~ Have some more, you kinky slut."

-even as her bile rose in her mouth.
She let the bile dribble out of her mouth, wanting to get rid of the bitter taste...
But the pain in her heart hurt too much to even make the effort to spit. How absurd.

The absurdly wide staircase stretched all the way to the top, its open design beckoning her up.

Every step of the stairs a new memory. Of presenting a flying fox, nervous and sheepish, to the faceless wife. Of shock when she was hugged back by her love, all expression scratched off with knives. Of tears as she felt safe and whole after so long.

So long...

This staircase is just so painfully long. So... she stifles a sob, terrified they would hear her. In the middle of the stairs, diamonds are added to the lapels of her suit under the direct light of the callously curious moon. She heaves, snot pouring out of her nose, vision swimming.

Her foot slides back a little.

Crimson eyes, blurred and blinded, widen. She wildly waves her arms to swing herself forward. Hunched over like a cat, her claws scrape against the obsidian floors.

She hurries out of the light of the invasive outside, her passionate hate of the mocking surroundings that whisper and taunt every second returning so easily. She thought she had worked past that. Past that with...

Oh.

With her most perfect, and loving, and amazing... wife.

She fled upstairs, cloak billowing. Now heedless of noise. She was trying to escape in the wrong direction.

She had to go towards her place of safety, with all of her blankets and pillows and stuffed animals. No one would be able to get to her there. She would be safe there, untouched by a hateful world and a hateful wife. Nobody couldn't sully her bed.

She wrenched open the door, crouching and leaping toward the bed. Toward safety.

A rubber dong smacked the bridge of her nose as she flew midair towards the isolated protection of a circle of stuffed animals and beaniebags.

Her wife, assuredly of solid character and a heart of gold, climaxed over her sheets and some random woman.

Oh right.

She let her wife into her bedroom. She trusted the love of her life with everything after all.

Rows and rows of black fangs salt the blackish-red insides of a woman's throat with the glistening diamonds streaming down the broken vampire's face. A curtain must be open in the bedroom.

There is no shouting.

Fat squeals as inhuman fingers grab two blobs and compress them until they give up their gummy squeaking and ooze through the gaps.

No screams of terror.

A small woman scratches at her clawed feet. The intestines were hooked on her toes, unspooling out of the waist of a stranger. Fecal matter flops out all over the stuffed animals.

Only hysterical sobbing from only one person.

Ribs are now cracking apart like glowsticks after the barbaric mauling of the chest. Tiny hands are snapping the surprisingly thin bones in half.

And from bone crunching.

A throat bulges with liquid rushing down it; sating thirst.

And one cannot forget the sounds of the baptismal sprays of blood hosing the walls. Sounds like sunny summer at the bright poolside, with a slip 'n' slide on the side.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Rushing water.

The faucet is running.

"It won't come off," she says drily.

She keeps scrubbing.

A light frown crawls across her face. She puts more work into it, really putting some elbow grease into rubbing the stains off of her hands.

Her arms move back and forth, washing off her hands as thoroughly as she can.

She looks at the mirror, unable to see anything.

But she knows it's there. The stains of her beloved soulmate.

She'll get them off her face soon enough.

She raises her two clean stubs, and sticks her cheeks in an awkward position under the bottle attached to her faucet.

Whistling, she starts scrubbing away at her jaw. Blood still spurts out of her half-disintegrated wrists. Sharp fragments of the ulna and radius cut into her cheekbones.

After some hard effort, her face finally starts sloughing off into the sink too, black fangs rattling in the porcelain and scarlet facial muscle meatily slapping over the drain.

The bottle emptied.

Socketless, with elbows and nothing less, she fumbles another bottle. Twisting and twisting, screwing it on over and over. Her lower face half-melted, a hairless frown within the flesh slurry, she tries to bite her tongue in concentration. She only found an ulcer-ridden nub, but she at least managed to get the new bottle.

She resumes scrubbing.

Her whistling resumes. The whistling of her lungs sending air to and from two nasal slits.

Gold writing gleams dimly in the dusty bathroom lights.

꧁༺ 𝓗𝓸𝓵𝔂 𝓦𝓪𝓽𝓮𝓻 ༻꧂
 
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A strange moaning could be heard.

Her brow knitted with a frown.

She tiptoed through the vast, empty kitchen, feeling oh so small.

"Ohhhh... yesssss... yesssss... MOMMY!" a familiar woman's voice tried to whisper, only for the woman well-known to her to end up shouting in ecstasy instead of her attempts at being quiet.

In the center of the kitchen, encircled by shadows growing and trembling into a crowd of silent haters, her lips trembled, a fang biting into the lower lip nervously. And as she passed out of the silver light, which filled the hollow space oh so dimly, her mouth tilted upside down. She could already figure where this was going. She didn't want to know.
Or at least, that was she told herself.
But she continued walking toward the upper bedroom-

"We need to finish before she gets h-OH YEAH! RIGHT THERE! GET YOUR STRAP R-mmmmm..."
"Oh? You like that~ Have some more, you kinky slut."

-even as her bile rose in her mouth.
She let the bile dribble out of her mouth, wanting to get rid of the bitter taste...
But the pain in her heart hurt too much to even make the effort to spit. How absurd.

The absurdly wide staircase stretched all the way to the top, its open design beckoning her up.

Every step of the stairs a new memory. Of presenting a flying fox, nervous and sheepish, to the faceless wife. Of shock when she was hugged back by her love, all expression scratched off with knives. Of tears as she felt safe and whole after so long.

So long...

This staircase is just so painfully long. So... she stifles a sob, terrified they would hear her. In the middle of the stairs, diamonds are added to the lapels of her suit under the direct light of the callously curious moon. She heaves, snot pouring out of her nose, vision swimming.

Her foot slides back a little.

Crimson eyes, blurred and blinded, widen. She wildly waves her arms to swing herself forward. Hunched over like a cat, her claws scrape against the obsidian floors.

She hurries out of the light of the invasive outside, her passionate hate of the mocking surroundings that whisper and taunt every second returning so easily. She thought she had worked past that. Past that with...

Oh.

With her most perfect, and loving, and amazing... wife.

She fled upstairs, cloak billowing. Now heedless of noise. She was trying to escape in the wrong direction.

She had to go towards her place of safety, with all of her blankets and pillows and stuffed animals. No one would be able to get to her there. She would be safe there, untouched by a hateful world and a hateful wife. Nobody couldn't sully her bed.

She wrenched open the door, crouching and leaping toward the bed. Toward safety.

A rubber dong smacked the bridge of her nose as she flew midair towards the isolated protection of a circle of stuffed animals and beaniebags.

Her wife, assuredly of solid character and a heart of gold, climaxed over her sheets and some random woman.

Oh right.

She let her wife into her bedroom. She trusted the love of her life with everything after all.

Rows and rows of black fangs salt the blackish-red insides of a woman's throat with the glistening diamonds streaming down the broken vampire's face. A curtain must be open in the bedroom.

There is no shouting.

Fat squeals as inhuman fingers grab two blobs and compress them until they give up their gummy squeaking and ooze through the gaps.

No screams of terror.

A small woman scratches at her clawed feet. The intestines were hooked on her toes, unspooling out of the waist of a stranger. Fecal matter flops out all over the stuffed animals.

Only hysterical sobbing from only one person.

Ribs are now cracking apart like glowsticks after the barbaric mauling of the chest. Tiny hands are snapping the surprisingly thin bones in half.

And from bone crunching.

A throat bulges with liquid rushing down it; sating thirst.

And one cannot forget the sounds of the baptismal sprays of blood hosing the walls. Sounds like sunny summer at the bright poolside, with a slip 'n' slide on the side.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Rushing water.

The faucet is running.

"It won't come off," she says drily.

She keeps scrubbing.

A light frown crawls across her face. She puts more work into it, really putting some elbow grease into rubbing the stains off of her hands.

Her arms move back and forth, washing off her hands as thoroughly as she can.

She looks at the mirror, unable to see anything.

But she knows it's there. The stains of her beloved soulmate.

She'll get them off her face soon enough.

She raises her two clean stubs, and sticks her cheeks in an awkward position under the bottle attached to her faucet.

Whistling, she starts scrubbing away at her jaw. Blood still spurts out of her half-disintegrated wrists. Sharp fragments of the ulna and radius cut into her cheekbones.

After some hard effort, her face finally starts sloughing off into the sink too, black fangs rattling in the porcelain and scarlet facial muscle meatily slapping over the drain.

The bottle emptied.

Socketless, with elbows and nothing less, she fumbles another bottle. Twisting and twisting, screwing it on over and over. Her lower face half-melted, a hairless frown within the flesh slurry, she tries to bite her tongue in concentration. She only found an ulcer-ridden nub, but she at least managed to get the new bottle.

She resumes scrubbing.

Her whistling resumes. The whistling of her lungs sending air to and from two nasal slits.

Gold writing gleams dimly in the dusty bathroom lights.

It's a good thing I am too dumb to understand a good bulk of this.
 
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