Howdy-do, asking for feedback regarding a story of mine?

[Nonary]

So uh, howdy. I'm a relatively new writer who only started writing this thing about two months ago? I'm not quite sure but uh, I'd like to have some feedback regarding this cobbled-up story of mine. I think it's horrendous, it's just my bias.

It's a hodge-podge of genres, incorporating scifi and fantasy in the story. Though I'm not really sure whether the litrpg tag is accurate or not.

As a heads up, there's a fuckton of swearing and a few moments of gore. Sooo, cheers!

Imaginary Numbers | Scribble Hub

 

[chapter1king]

Hello there, will have a look and give as much feedback (as my time allows). Do you prefer DM or shall I just post it here?

Equally - would appreciate it if you take a look at my writing :)

INVICTUS

In a world riddled with discontent, Kain strives to fulfil his desires. Will he succeed or vanish in the sands of time? Release schedule - depends on availability

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Thanks!