How's the typography on this cover? (Upcoming series)

[KrakenRiderEmma]

Trying to do something a bit weirder but not sure it reads easily enough.

 

[Zinless]

Looks great!

My only problem is with the font, it feels out of place. But I understand it's for the sake of readability.

 

[melchi]

Trying to do something a bit weirder but not sure it reads easily enough.

Hmm is it hard to read in a thumbnail?

 

[Narcissistic_loser]

Hard to read for me

 

[TotallyHuman]

I like it. The yellow kind of reminds me of spiderman comic book covers if that was what you were going for

 

[Deleted member 54065]

Trying to do something a bit weirder but not sure it reads easily enough.

Well, it would look more natural if the texts are behind her, and by removing the emboss effect.

 

[LilRora]

I like how it looks, but it's hard to read. Especially on a small picture that most people will see when looking for stories.

Also, I don't think the emboldened text is good for readability in this case.

 

[Akaichi]

Try a red or orange grafity withered look. It would be better. (Like the high school of the dead logo)
And I am not a fan of the rotations, but do what works for you!

 

[Dearest_Violet]

Trying to do something a bit weirder but not sure it reads easily enough.

I don't believe the font color suits the color palette, but I think its plenty readable.

 

[ManwX]

Its a great cover but the text might be hard to read. The image here is big of course but when you use it on your fiction the text would be hard to read because of the positioning and size. I would suggest a star wars angle text front and centre. Would look great imo. Anyway soild art and cover aside from the text.

 

[KrakenRiderEmma]

Thanks for the thoughts, everyone who commented. Definitely going to mess around with palette, position and readability some more, to see if I can "get away" with the frankly ridiculous angle. Standard ScribbleHub thumbnail size is small enough that it's pretty hard to read a title of this length in any case, but fortunately the title is almost always next to the image at the smallest sizes. I think the biggest problem is where the letters overlap with her shirt.

I like it. The yellow kind of reminds me of spiderman comic book covers if that was what you were going for

Ding ding ding! You got the visual reference. I'm sure the title helps, but part of the premise here is "what if high school Spider-Man, but turning neutral evil"