I made this for a cover, but should I add some shade above his eyes?

[CrimsonGenius]

 

[tiaf]

the face should reflect the light if anything

 

[greyliliy]

Your shadows don't reflect your light source.

Here's a tutorial that may be helpful! Understanding Light & Shadows

 

[CrimsonGenius]

Here is an updated version.

 

[ACertainPassingUser]

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Here is an updated version.

Remove the shadow of the crystal, because its the lightsource.

 

[Notadate]

Remove the shadow of the crystal, because its the lightsource.

Naw the light manifests infront of the crystal

 

[Wlel]

It's fine. Just add some light reflection on the face

 

[ACertainPassingUser]

Naw the light manifests infront of the crystal

That's a rather bad way to break the cliché.

Might as well remove the gem and just add floating light orb or something

 

[Notadate]

That's a rather bad way to break the cliché.

Might as well remove the gem and just add floating light orb or something

Naw

 

[CrimsonGenius]

 

[RepresentingEnvy]

Noice.

 

[TotallyHuman]

I feel the hair should shine differently but now sure