I need an editor.

[COLOC_Kid]

I need an editor to help me out a bit.

I am from the skies so I have allspeak. humans have this weird thing called punctuation and im an angel so I don't understand it, will you help me as my editor( not teacher)?

 

[High-in-the-skys]

I am from the skies so I have allspeak

You called?
Anyways give me the link to your story. If I find it interesting, I would comment things that I find jarring. Take note though, not an expert in english...

 

[COLOC_Kid]

You called?
Anyways give me the link to your story. If I find it interesting, I would comment things that I find jarring. Take note though, not an expert in english...

got it.

the dual serpents

What happens when a disorganized biologist gets transported into a different world as a dual serpent. The other half of the 'Twin of the Isles' is contained inside the egg. In the egg's body, a serpent-like beast emerges. The monster is completely different from its counterpart and is shrouded...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[COLOC_Kid]

You called?
Anyways give me the link to your story. If I find it interesting, I would comment things that I find jarring. Take note though, not an expert in english...

sorry double reply.

I started convo with you for unreleased chapters.

 

[High-in-the-skys]

sorry double reply.

I started convo with you for unreleased chapters.

Seems interesting.
Gonna do it around tomorrow though, since it's pretty much night from where I am and I needed to sleep soon.

 

[Spica66]

Damn I need one too.

 

[Ai-chan]

I need an editor to help me out a bit.

I am from the skies so I have allspeak. humans have this weird thing called punctuation and im an angel so I don't understand it, will you help me as my editor( not teacher)?

... Ai-chan had a look at your novel, thinking to volunteer if it's not too bad and then Ai-chan thought, "Dude, come on..."

Your 'errors' are less of an error and more of a 'I couldn't care less'. Before you get an editor, put some effort, man. At least use capital letter for the first letter of your sentences.

Yes, Ai-chan too often do not use capital letters for the first letter of the sentence, but that's in sex chats, where Ai-chan couldn't give a damn if the other side gets bothered by it. But this is a story, a composition. If Ai-chan is your English teacher, Ai-chan would've burst a blood vessel from how many unnecessary basic errors Ai-chan had to mark.

 

[COLOC_Kid]

... Ai-chan had a look at your novel, thinking to volunteer if it's not too bad and then Ai-chan thought, "Dude, come on..."

Your 'errors' are less of an error and more of a 'I couldn't care less'. Before you get an editor, put some effort, man. At least use capital letter for the first letter of your sentences.

Yes, Ai-chan too often do not use capital letters for the first letter of the sentence, but that's in sex chats, where Ai-chan couldn't give a damn if the other side gets bothered by it. But this is a story, a composition. If Ai-chan is your English teacher, Ai-chan would've burst a blood vessel from how many unnecessary basic errors Ai-chan have to mark.

wow, unexpected but yes this angel could have done more for your human minds. I apologize I have not utilized all speak as well as I should have(because I'm a young angel only 29,000 years). At least you should like the premise/story.