I would like feedback on my first 15 chapters

Enoch

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I know that 8,700 words is basically nothing to the people who read webnovels for fun, as some stories (especially translated ones) can get up to hundreds of thousands of words. So, I'd like some thoughts on how my first 15 chapters have gone. If you want to read less but still give me an opinion, go ahead, beggars can't be choosers, but not a lot of people comment or are active readers so I want fresh opinions.

 
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