ThatRandomWriter
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I um, am not sure what to put here, other than saying that part 2 is currently being worked on, but going forward I would like to hear criticisms given to the story. So part 1 is here and um, part 2, all three chapters of it are also available for critique.
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Ultima NPC: Part 1 (Original)
What would you do in a world you don't know? For Alexander, now renamed Ultima, he decides to stay with the same organization that has enslaved and hypnotized him, and face the incoming dangers alongside it. What is that danger? Nothing less than the dreaded players, who in their own...
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