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[Kakurenbo]

A King’s reincarnation

Business Devil, World's mightiest, God of War, King of humanity All of these are the titles of Lucas, the king standing at the Earth's apex. Wealth? He holds 68% of Earth's total assets granting him the title of 'Business Devil'. Authority? He was granted a level of Authority that no one...

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[Lloyd]

You switched between present and past tense a few times at the start of the story. You got more consistent with using past tense as the chapter went on.