Alright a while ago I began writing a series and dropped it shortly after it started due to unfortunate circumstances.
Anyways I'm looking for ways to improve further since during my time off I practiced my writing.
Chapters 1-7 are when I started and chapter 8 is well hopefully better than the rest.
I plan to go back and fix any errors and I'm sure theres plenty but I figured I'd get some advice from other people since I'm sure I have some bias that will affect how I see what I posted
Heres the novel
Basic synopsis is married dude dies after robber kills him and his family. He reincarnated into a demon nation to fight against humans in exchange for his family whose souls were preserved. king tries to take absolute control over him but fails since the divine weapon(wraths fire) givin to the mc is better than he thought. MC escapes and makes a better deal with the weapon and now hes traveling the world with his new master.
Basically dude travels with something he clearly cant handle and clewrlt has the power to do whatever it wants to him
Anyways I'm looking for ways to improve further since during my time off I practiced my writing.
Chapters 1-7 are when I started and chapter 8 is well hopefully better than the rest.
I plan to go back and fix any errors and I'm sure theres plenty but I figured I'd get some advice from other people since I'm sure I have some bias that will affect how I see what I posted
Heres the novel
A strangers story
Okay so I for real try to write a non shitty dark isekai Alright so basically guy and his family dies and he gets isekaid to a demon nation. In exchange for his service the king will bring back his family but this king isnt being honest about many things....
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Basic synopsis is married dude dies after robber kills him and his family. He reincarnated into a demon nation to fight against humans in exchange for his family whose souls were preserved. king tries to take absolute control over him but fails since the divine weapon(wraths fire) givin to the mc is better than he thought. MC escapes and makes a better deal with the weapon and now hes traveling the world with his new master.
Basically dude travels with something he clearly cant handle and clewrlt has the power to do whatever it wants to him