Look at it and see what you think

[BackWoodsJ_ACK]

I believe I posted this before (can't remember) but here's the story I've been writing for a good bit now and I wanted some feedback. More specifically the characters and overall concept. I'm trying to make them more human. I think I'm doing a good job so far.

As for the concept, it's nothing too out of the ordinary, just a war scarred former hero who leans more on the gray side.

Here's the story: The Return of an Unlikely Hero