Looking for feedback before I start another novel

[SSPy]

Was planning on starting a novel, and I wanted to make sure it didn't suck. I will appreciate if someone could read at least, read a little of my old novel for their opinion so I won't commit same mistakes on my new one and also can improve the old one. Ifor the moment it has only five chapters so there still room for me to change something of the old if it sucks.

Mechanical Blood

In a dystopian cyberpunk world where the lines between humanity and technology are blurred, a cyborg girl is created to serve as the perfect soldier for one of the most powerful corporations in the city. As she confronts each new challenge and obstacle, her sense of self and desire for...

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Merci becacoup.

 

[J_Chemist]

If you enjoy writing it, then continue to write it regardless of whether or not it sucks.

Opinions are biased and impartial. Do what you love. Screw everyone else.

 

[SSPy]

If you enjoy writing it, then continue to write it regardless of whether or not it sucks.

Opinions are biased and impartial. Do what you love. Screw everyone else.

Agree, but still don't want to do shit

 

[J_Chemist]

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