Looking for feedback for my isekai light novel - WHEN I GOT REINCARNATED AS A SPIDER WITH MY GODDESS

[Noel_Elitia]

Any reader who would like to try a new isekai light novel is free to give their feedback on my novel and I will be grateful to their support.
The title says it all for the description I suppose.
Here is the link :-

When I Got Reincarnated As A Spider With My Goddess

Sixteen years old Sachi, along with her classmates dies in a school bus accident. But then are suddenly brought back to life in the divine realm where the Gods offer them another chance to be reborn in another world in order to restore stability in this new world of magic...

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[Maldon]

it look interesting, it sounds a lot like kumo desu ka? and I liked that one a lot, so I'll read it when I have the time and leave a review

also
>Non combat goddess
>Athena

 

[Lloyd]

The start is kinda boring. Don't think I'd keep reading

 

[Renaxan]

Have read it until the chapter where everyone got in traffic accident. It was kinda okay-ish, but I got a question.

Why everything you writen happen in bold? It is really distracting ngl. Also I am bit confused about the POV, perhaps mark it better?

 

[Lloyd]

Yeah everything in bold makes it look weird