hrhngnbrbhgrng
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Hey, I recently just started working on a fantasy story that you can find here.
Right now, I've only got one chapter done. But obviously, first impressions are important, right? So I want to have my first chapter critiqued and analyzed so I can 1. fix it up and 2. fix up later chapters.
The theme I'm aiming for in the long run is basically what you can see in the genres. Action, adventure, comedy, fantasy, drama.
Things I'm especially looking for feedback on is the style, character quality, and overall quality.
Thanks.
Right now, I've only got one chapter done. But obviously, first impressions are important, right? So I want to have my first chapter critiqued and analyzed so I can 1. fix it up and 2. fix up later chapters.
The theme I'm aiming for in the long run is basically what you can see in the genres. Action, adventure, comedy, fantasy, drama.
Things I'm especially looking for feedback on is the style, character quality, and overall quality.
Thanks.