Thank you for the feedback. From the web novels I read previously, I also found myself skimming a lot and skipping some sections entirely. Therefore, I had intended to write a story that would be read chronologically, with a protagonist who has to revise his own plans as the story unfolds. My focus was on plot and character development, so there are time skips and expositions for those time skips. If I am to show every development in detail, there would be a lot of repetition and skippable sequences. In general, I tried to not name characters who do not show up later in the story. The fact that you picked a random chapter and found it boring is a concern, however.
Is the work bland because of the skimming (in search of action sequence) or bland because of the narration is too long winded?
To answer your question, a lot of both. I also decided to read partway through and give my thoughts on parts of chapter 10.
Why did so many people gather for sect mission with Vazarl? Do they not have their own lives to live?
Why would Vazarl seem impish when helping his fellow disciples after luring mana beasts? Isn't he just an asshole?
What was the point of the sect leader passing the flute to another person, who also passed it on? Am I suppose to be laughing or crying?
Why am I reading about the Crown Prince admitting about losing instead of reading a conversation of him admitting it? Why tell me instead of showing it? "Huanlan might be my superior in cultivation/hunting/whatever, but Vazarl is nothing compared to me."
I've yet to actually read a western author use "[subject] smiling and asked" in a hardback book. Someone doing the "smiling ask" just makes me think of China.
How did the disciples fight during the 3 continuous hours? Did they just take turns similar to RPGs? Hit, get hit, repeat? Why is only Vazarl unscathed? Was he a coward?
I don't care about the faceless disciples speculating. If the speculation mattered, it would be have to be in dialogue, heard through whispers or wild theories made between friends.
Why the hell is Drakkean telling me that Vazarl is capable of committing atrocities? Am I suppose to like Vazarl now that I know he can kill me 10 times over?
Why is Crown Prince Altan feeling humiliated? I thought he was fine being below Huanlan?
What were the disciples doing during the month long sect mission? Did they eat mana beast meat? Did no one get hurt?
Before I even got a a third of the way into the chapter, I'm burned out from reading. That's not a good sign.
Why are people giving up their cultivation cores?
I stopped after reading about the relinquishing of cores and skimmed. I tried to keep reading, but the more I read, the more I wanted to not read. There's only so much I can take of mind numbing reading.