Looking For Some Feedback

[ArcanePunkster]

I just want to get some feedback on my web novel. It's already got a couple of chapters, most of them averaging around 3000 words, some being a bit longer. Want to have some pointers on what I can improve on, what works or doesn't work, and if it's an enjoyable read. Feel free to either leave a comment/review on the web novel webpage itself or here in this thread.

Thanks in advance!

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/460058/reines-schwert/

 

[dummycake]

I just want to get some feedback on my web novel. It's already got a couple of chapters, most of them averaging around 3000 words, some being a bit longer. Want to have some pointers on what I can improve on, what works or doesn't work, and if it's an enjoyable read. Feel free to either leave a comment/review on the web novel webpage itself or here in this thread.

Thanks in advance!

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/460058/reines-schwert/

I think the link it's broken, if I click it sends me to http://reines%20schwert/

 

[ArcanePunkster]

I think the link it's broken, if I click it sends me to http://reines%20schwert/

My bad, accidentally put the URL in the text tab instead, should be working now.

 

[Lodur]

Born into a nation of half-elves

How is that even possible? All elves hate each other to such degree, that for one marriage to their own kind there are five marriages to other species?