Just read through the prologue. It's intriguing! Makes me wonder what's in the first chapter. I'll try reading that later. As for now, I found a few issues with your prologue that I wanted to point out.
...not occur to the Lilyflower that the area it was in was inhabitable.
I think the above sentence should end in "uninhabitable". It seems like creatures are wandering away because they can't live there, but "inhabitable" implies that they can.
There was an age where nothing but ice existed. There was then an age where lush forests and towering dinosaurs roamed the land. There was an age where molten lava crushed any life that begins. There was an age where nothing but life exists. Millions became billions, as time continued to flow.
You change which tense you are using in the above section. "There was...existed." is past tense, while "crushed anything that begins" starts out past tense and then jumps to present tense. To fix the tense issues, I would rewrite the section like this:
There was an age where nothing but ice existed. There was then an age where lush forests and towering dinosaurs roamed the land. There was an age where molten lava crushed any life that began. There was an age where nothing but life existed. Millions became billions, as time continued to flow.
Also, in the previous quote, I'm not sure what the sentence 'There was an age where nothing but life exists' means. Did you mean to say something like this? 'There was an age where no life existed.'
I hope that helps. I'll try and read chapter one later.
