Zinless
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Reincarnated Into Two Bodies
After falling to his death, he wakes up with two bodies?! Reincarnated as both a humble commoner boy and a privileged young noble girl, our protagonist enjoys their new chance in life with two different perspectives. Although they only wished for a peaceful life, the world had other plans in...
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The first story i ever wrote.
Is my grammar okay? Are there any redundant dialogue or sentences? Is it understandable?
What should i do about [insert a problem you noticed here]?
Any feedback is encouraged, thank you.