Mythology novel

[IsseiVeskitos]

Hello, I just started writing a novel in a world where all the mythology exists and the main one is also a goddess. please i need my story review for better writing.

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[J_Chemist]

Your threads are backwards.

 

[proxybaba]

The only thing I understand is bonjour

 

[IsseiVeskitos]

Sorry, I meant to say that I'm starting a story about mythology and I need constructive criticism to improve myself.
I am French and I wrote French as I usually do, really sorry