Mythron Chronicles

[Wintertime]

Hey! I'm Winter and I have been enjoying the Scribblehub community for quite a bit now. I'm writing a high fantasy novel based on western influences, however, it's also an excuse for me to write a good Isekai novel. I want some feedback on the grammar, direction, perspective, storyline, and things that you think I have done good or bad along with any interesting things that caught your eye, or extra comments you want to add.

If you are interested in doing a joint review project, where we both give feedback on our respective stories, then that can be an option as well. Just message me privately on Scribblehub or add me on discord at Winter#2896.

Thanks!

Mythron Chronicles

Savo is a hardworking businessman and entrepreneur. At age twenty-four, he is the CEO and head chairman of one of the largest and most prominent corporations within the country. Wearied of his repetitive daily tasks and mundane lifestyle, however, he finds asylum in his workshop: A secret room...

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